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  1. April 4th, 2001, 02:39 AM #1
    Serenna
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    lips are acquainted
    and dance uninhibited
    for pleasure so right


  2. April 4th, 2001, 04:42 PM #2
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    Wow...short but to the point...I loved it...Great job...Sometimes the shorter poems can hit you harder.
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    I looked at this one for awhile...at different times too...very small...and a good haiku........I had to think about it a little bit, but I got an image from it....good good good
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